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I. Assignment
- Subject, Purpose And Genre Are Appropriate

II. Purpose
- Purpose Of Writing For Assignment And Consistency

III. Audience
- Addressing Intended Audience And Expectation

IV. Genre
- Organization, Evidence, Language, Format, Conventions

V. Thesis
- Claim And Where It Becomes Clear And Matches

VI. Organization
- Main Points And How Well They Support Thesis And Arrangement

VII. Development
- Details, Examples, And Evidence Support Each Point

VIII. Unity
- Contribution To Thesis

IX. Coherence
- Clarity And Smoothness/Transitions

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"Shall we dance under the evening sun bright, late into the glassy-eyed moon's light?" ~~ God Of Death;
'Tsukuyomi Yin'

"Tears of a thousand,
Pain of a million," ~~Tear Lacrimoso;
'Weeping Willow'

"Filled with Destruction and Anguish,
Grinding your emotions down to dust,
Crushing your happiness into nothing," ~~ Mechanica;
'The Reaper'

"Our thoughts clash
And my soul weeps..." ~~ Moon's Passion;
'Deadly Rondo'

"Nothing is unclear to eyes cleansed by tears." ~~ An Elegant Engagement;
'Moonlight Waltz'

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