The Veritas; The Crystal Dimension
"The Veritas Is Under Attack. Again... By Bill Gates, The Government, And Kenzie Reeves, Who Works For Them. I'll Let You Know If Anyone Else Ever Does Get 'System Passwords' From Me." - Founder/Owner (Tymon Nikia Bolton II)
The Veritas; The Crystal Dimension
"The Veritas Is Under Attack. Again... By Bill Gates, The Government, And Kenzie Reeves, Who Works For Them. I'll Let You Know If Anyone Else Ever Does Get 'System Passwords' From Me." - Founder/Owner (Tymon Nikia Bolton II)
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Tear M. Lacrimoso
Shinigami Tsukuyomi :: Moon's Eye Mirror; Keeper of the Crystal Heart
Shinigami Tsukuyomi :: Moon's Eye Mirror; Keeper of the Crystal Heart
Tear M. Lacrimoso


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Join date : 2014-11-04
Age : 30
Location : Pandemia (Mors Academia)
Job/hobbies : The Teacher

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PostSubject: POV Paper   POV Paper EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 11:50 am

Write 'Personal Experience Paper' from 'Point Of View' of another person in the story.

https://theveritas.forummotion.com/t2215-personal-experience-paper
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Tear M. Lacrimoso
Shinigami Tsukuyomi :: Moon's Eye Mirror; Keeper of the Crystal Heart
Shinigami Tsukuyomi :: Moon's Eye Mirror; Keeper of the Crystal Heart
Tear M. Lacrimoso


Posts : 2054
Dog
Pisces Male Points : 3041
Reputation : 1
Join date : 2014-11-04
Age : 30
Location : Pandemia (Mors Academia)
Job/hobbies : The Teacher

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PostSubject: Re: POV Paper   POV Paper EmptyWed Apr 26, 2017 7:45 pm

Viewpoint of 'Friends And Family' ft. 'Associates':

The Veritas is nice and everything, but it's doing too much. Tymon has better things to do than to sit around writing stories all day that don't make any money. He has a daughter that he needs to support and go find a job and make a living working a 9 to 5 like everyone else instead of working on the Veritas. It won't ever go anywhere anytime soon, so he needs to stop wasting his time and actually do something productive for his life. At least he's in school, though. That's something.

I think it's a good way for Tymon to express his creativity, but I also think it's crazy and that he just uses it to vent out all his craziness. It looks nice, but I think he should see someone about his mental illness, which he's still denying that he has. I feel sorry for him because he has this mental illness, and I feel sorry for his daughter because she has a deadbeat dad that has a mental disability and can't hold a steady job but sits around and writes stories that don't even make any sense and aren't even interesting. He can't even hold himself together, so he has no business trying to do something so big. He should be more practical, or cut down the Veritas so that it's something that other people can understand so that he can make some money.

It's a mess, but it's a good idea. I think it has some potential, but I think Tymon's just too mentally unstable to actually be able to do anything useful with what he's got, so it all is just going to waste. He's wasting his time and his talent, but at least he's not bothering anyone or hurting anyone. I just really wish he would do something about his mental issues. For his daughter's sake. Maybe after he gets the help he needs then he'll be able to do something with it, but until it makes any money, I don't buy it. He has better things to do in terms of his long-term life goals. He has a family to feed and sitting around daydreaming all day doesn't actually make any money. He needs to go outside and do something.

But don't tell him I said that.
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