Personal Experience Paper

A meaningful personal experience of mine that has shaped me to be who I am today is the time when I began to work on building the Veritas, which harbors my artwork and my business.

When I first began, I was nowhere near comprehensive of where it would lead, and it was all being done simply in good fun and the desire to make life easier for others as well as have the most maximum amount of fun and diversity as possible. I designed it as a land where I would do as I do and uphold an ongoing civilization that was created by myself and some friends of mine at our leisure in our youth. It was because of my own ever expanding ideas that it continues to grow and I was not aware of this until now, having to look back on it. Originally, I had no intention of harboring my art work that I had done in my youth on the Veritas, but somehow, as it has grown, all of my artwork I had ever done as a child -- down to the very last drawing I have -- fits into the grand design of it all somehow and more parts are built when more of my elder artwork is pieced together and placed properly in the Veritas. It serves as both a universal portfolio and an ark of sorts for my entire childhood of nonstop  drawing. I was not aware of how my art back then would blossom, either, nor was I concerned about such as I did it. Looking back on it, with all the great versatility I have, I feel just like I did back in my youth yet also applied to greater things than just the works of my youth. I am most pleased with the personal experience I have, despite how much horrible tragic turmoil it took to get to this point. I believe the results are well worth it. It hasn't failed me yet.

There are many components that go into the overall schematics of my design, all of which function completely properly in helping the entire process along of building and structuring growth. The Communication System that is imported into it directly via me, myself, is also useful for more than just the Veritas, alone. I utilize the communication system I have created for many other things outside of the Veritas in order to both extend the Veritas (since it's part of the Veritas, by design) and to deal with all things that may arise universally in a component that translates directly into whatever it is at whatever time -- new or old. Without content, it requires a great deal of buildup, but with a greater stock, the circulation becomes more fluent. I am definitely happy with how it is coming along and cannot wait to see what sort of creation it becomes by the time of its full completion. It randomly makes sporadic giant leaps in growth that suddenly come upon me, transforming it into something greater spontaneously. Therefore, I never quite know when it's going to actually be fully complete, since these sporadic jumps tend to happen when I am closing up and about to end something.

Revision Comments:

• Explain what The Veritas is, could confuse the readers
• Explain how The Veritas was created
• List some examples of how your art has blossomed that help the readers understand the improvement of your work
• Talk more about personal experiences you’ve had while working on your drawing. Focus more on experiences you’ve had through your work and less on how your level of experience has grown through drawing.
• Explain how using The Veritas has helped spread your artwork by serving as a portfolio
• What were some initial obstacles that first came up when first trying to spread your artwork?
• What inspired you to spread your work to others?
• What artwork from your childhood do you feel is most important to your overall portfolio?
• Explain how your work is circulated
• What do you think your artwork represents?